Pencil and Inks
I want to be a comic book writer. I want to get away with names like Katchoo-- to know people like names like that, to have a Story. I want to invent an inversion, to draw those three four lines that tell you all these do but in a glance, and a little bubble saying I want to be a comic book writer. I want to write about last summer's girl, about how we saw some certain things together; about the drive home. Panel 1 An over-shoulder shot I'm driving in the rain A fraction of curls suffices to show her makes me glance over Panel 2 wet lanes and trees black curls in profile she's looking at me I'm glancing back Panel 3 the empty road she's watching me (profile lines and shadow) legs crossed on the seat shoes on the floor Panel 4 the empty road wavy tracks, a stoplight, the search for a radio song Panel 5 radio's words spill into mine leading over to Panel 6 where she's singing and the lyrics leak Panel 7 to where I stop. I want to be a comic book writer, to pencils and ink reduce her, to have a page to show what's missing is the girl.